Could you please fix my sentences to sound natural??🍀🍀 This morning one of my closest colleagues called me. Her voice was trembling and she was crying really hard. She said her manager died over the night. Actually there was a workshop for senior staff at (2024)

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Could you please fix my sentences to sound natural??🍀🍀 This morning one of my closest colleagues called me. Her voice was trembling and she was crying really hard. She said her manager died over the night. Actually there was a workshop for senior staff at my company and they went on a trip to Jeju Island, which they departed yesterday. On their first night, while she was asleep, she got a heart attack. So the next day, when her roommate tried to wake her up to get breakfast, her body was already ice cold and she couldn’t open her eyes. I was completely shocked and I’m still in shock. How uncertain our life is? what’s the point of life? Yesterday she was excited and went on a trip but now she is not even exist anymore. Once again I realize, everything is super unpredictable and we can’t guarantee tomorrow. I was deeply upset and had an existential crisis. But I guess, even so, life is worth it and I’m going to be nicer to people around me and try to fully appriciate and be happy every single moment. (2)

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@Alice1009 This morning one of my closest colleagues called me. Her voice was trembling and she was crying really hard. She said her manager died during the night. There was a workshop for the senior staff at my company and they went on a trip to Jeju Island, which they departed yesterday.On their first night, while she was asleep, she had a heart attack. So the next day, when her roommate tried to wake her up to get breakfast, her body was already ice cold and she couldn’t open her eyes. I was completely shocked and I’m still in shock. How uncertain our life is? what’s the point of life? Yesterday she was excited and went on a trip but now she doesn't even exist anymore.Once again I realize, everything is highly unpredictable and we can’t guarantee what will happen tomorrow.I was deeply upset and had an existential crisis. But I guess, even so, life is worth it and I’m going to be even more kind to people around me and try to fully appreciate and be happy every single moment.Aside from a few grammatical errors, you are good to go :))

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This morning one of my closest colleagues called me. Her voice was trembling and she was crying really hard. She said her manager died during the night. There was a workshop for the senior staff at my company and they went on a trip to Jeju Island, which they departed yesterday.
On their first night, while she was asleep, she had a heart attack.
So the next day, when her roommate tried to wake her up to get breakfast, her body was already ice cold and she couldn’t open her eyes. I was completely shocked and I’m still in shock.
How uncertain our life is? what’s the point of life? Yesterday she was excited and went on a trip but now she doesn't even exist anymore.
Once again I realize, everything is highly unpredictable and we can’t guarantee what will happen tomorrow.
I was deeply upset and had an existential crisis.
But I guess, even so, life is worth it and I’m going to be even more kind to people around me and try to fully appreciate and be happy every single moment.

Aside from a few grammatical errors, you are good to go :))

Could you please fix my sentences to sound natural??🍀🍀 This morning one of my closest colleagues called me. Her voice was trembling and she was crying really hard. She said her manager died over the night. Actually there was a workshop for senior staff at my company and they went on a trip to Jeju Island, which they departed yesterday. On their first night, while she was asleep, she got a heart attack. So the next day, when her roommate tried to wake her up to get breakfast, her body was already ice cold and she couldn’t open her eyes. I was completely shocked and I’m still in shock. How uncertain our life is? what’s the point of life? Yesterday she was excited and went on a trip but now she is not even exist anymore. Once again I realize, everything is super unpredictable and we can’t guarantee tomorrow. I was deeply upset and had an existential crisis. But I guess, even so, life is worth it and I’m going to be nicer to people around me and try to fully appriciate and be happy every single moment. (4)

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Could you please fix my sentences to sound natural??🍀🍀 This morning one of my closest colleagues called me. Her voice was trembling and she was crying really hard. She said her manager died over the night. Actually there was a workshop for senior staff at my company and they went on a trip to Jeju Island, which they departed yesterday. On their first night, while she was asleep, she got a heart attack. So the next day, when her roommate tried to wake her up to get breakfast, her body was already ice cold and she couldn’t open her eyes. I was completely shocked and I’m still in shock. How uncertain our life is? what’s the point of life? Yesterday she was excited and went on a trip but now she is not even exist anymore. Once again I realize, everything is super unpredictable and we can’t guarantee tomorrow. I was deeply upset and had an existential crisis. But I guess, even so, life is worth it and I’m going to be nicer to people around me and try to fully appriciate and be happy every single moment. (11)

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Could you please fix my sentences to sound natural??🍀🍀 This morning one of my closest colleagues called me. Her voice was trembling and she was crying really hard. She said her manager died over the night. Actually there was a workshop for senior staff at my company and they went on a trip to Jeju Island, which they departed yesterday. On their first night, while she was asleep, she got a heart attack. So the next day, when her roommate tried to wake her up to get breakfast, her body was already ice cold and she couldn’t open her eyes. I was completely shocked and I’m still in shock. How uncertain our life is? what’s the point of life? Yesterday she was excited and went on a trip but now she is not even exist anymore. Once again I realize, everything is super unpredictable and we can’t guarantee tomorrow. I was deeply upset and had an existential crisis. But I guess, even so, life is worth it and I’m going to be nicer to people around me and try to fully appriciate and be happy every single moment. (13)

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Could you please fix my sentences to sound natural??🍀🍀 This morning one of my closest colleagues called me. Her voice was trembling and she was crying really hard. She said her manager died over the night. Actually there was a workshop for senior staff at my company and they went on a trip to Jeju Island, which they departed yesterday. On their first night, while she was asleep, she got a heart attack. So the next day, when her roommate tried to wake her up to get breakfast, her body was already ice cold and she couldn’t open her eyes. I was completely shocked and I’m still in shock. How uncertain our life is? what’s the point of life? Yesterday she was excited and went on a trip but now she is not even exist anymore. Once again I realize, everything is super unpredictable and we can’t guarantee tomorrow. I was deeply upset and had an existential crisis. But I guess, even so, life is worth it and I’m going to be nicer to people around me and try to fully appriciate and be happy every single moment. (14)

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